Wednesday, March 17, 2010

picnic

when I went digging for gold I found icky and gooey seaweed.I felt very tied.It was so smelly I had to block my nose so tight and I made a water hole it was as deep as you will need to swim in.The water hole felt as warm as a spa.I went on a special striped and shinny bus.I went with the whole school.I went because it was an exciting awesome picnic.I went staight after the boring roll.I went to have fun at lovely beautiful Fergusson park.I did some exciting games building very big and small sandcastles.I made a yucky gooey and sploshy sea weed tower.
By Rhys Howard

1 comment:

Room 11 OPS said...

nice bro.Your a good writer